Nice work, there, Mr. D. I'm assuming you want praise (which you deserve) and not picky things like 1) eliminate the second close-up into the film, it doesn't cut together with the first, and it's just redundant anyway; 2) fix the several too-abrupt fade-outs on the audio 3) next time, shoot with more lights instead of believing that just because you can see an image in the finder, viewers can actually see things like actors' eyes or expressions.

This will probably get more traffic and comments if it's posted in the "Independent Films" thread rather than Universal (where it really isn't appropriate).

And in about 7 years, if you need a geezer actor to play a disgusting Van Helsing type, lemme know.