<< So Bradbury and his work was neither mistreated by the studios <<

All the story points in Bradbury's "vulgar obvious" treatment, and in the treatment he much prefers, are practically identical. If the ideas in the "vulgar obvious" one are Alland's, then so are the ones in the preferred treatment.

If all that is true, then if anybody got mistreated, it was Alland when he was belittled by Bradbury in that "Turkey" essay. Alland had a right to boil over.